Sunday, January 20, 2019

Free Story: New, Not Better

I thought it might be fun if, once in a while, I showcase some of my writing here in the form of a free story.  So, here's one I wrote for... some deadline that didn't get accepted.  Hope you enjoy it.  


            Tiffany’s polished red thumbnail found the equally red button on the dash and pushed.  Again, nothing happened… not even a revving noise.  Her husband—his thinning, mousy hair caught in a light breeze as he bent over the holo-reader—sighed.  His finger jabbed at the screen, presumably scrolling through the owner’s manual to the hovercraft the couple were currently sitting in.  She sighed, leaning back in her seat.  With another huff of aggravation, her husband began to shake his head at the screen in his hands, as if it were arguing with him.
            “Do you have the key turned?” he asked without looking at his wife.
            She closed her eyes.  Tiffany was not good with heights.  The fact that she could successfully drive a hovercraft of any sort between point A and point B was nothing short of a miracle… so the idea of being in a brand-spanking new model of craft that flew a good three hundred feet above last year’s models was making her feel sick.
            “Yes, Herbert.  I have the key turned,” she said in a monotonous tone.
            Herbert huffed again, jabbing some more at the screen.  With a couple of deep breaths, she finally managed a peek over the side of the craft, looking straight down.  Gasping, she immediately realized that that was a mistake.  Other hovercrafts zoomed by so far below the two that they were totally unaware of their presence, stuck hovering several hundred feet above the nearest parking port.  She slammed her back against her driver’s seat, trying to calm her increasingly erratic breathing.  Herbert did not even glance at her way.
            “Well,” Tiffany said with a hollow laugh, “at least we’re not plummeting to our deaths.”
            “Yeah,” Herbert responded without a hint of amusement.  “That’s the new thrusters on the bottom of the craft.  Exclusive to this year’s model.  Guaranteed to still run, even if the craft won’t.”
            “Why would someone just want to hover in midair?” his wife muttered.
            Now Herbert looked at her, one brow raised.  “It’s a safety precaution, Tiff.”
            She rolled her eyes.  “I’m aware of that.  I’m just saying.  They must have very little confidence in their new and better model if they have to install something like that.”
            “It’s not that, Tiffany.  This car has the highest safety rating—”
            And that’s when Tiffany stopped listening.  Instead, she glared straight ahead at the steering wheel.  She missed their other hovercraft, the one they had traded not hours ago for this hunk of junk.  The couple was just seven clicks away from the dealership, and now they were stuck and broken down.
            “Damn it!” Herbert yelled, throwing the holo-reader into the floorboard, causing Tiffany to jump.  “There’s not a damn thing in that manual to help.”
            With a groan and her face turned skywards, Tiffany reached out and held the button on the dash down.  Again, not a sound. 
            “That’s not gonna work, Tiff.  You can stop trying.”
            “I don’t appreciate you snapping at me.  I don’t see you trying anything.”
            He scoffed, turning his head away from her. 
            “Hey, I’m not the one who wanted this stupid hovercraft in the first place.  I liked our old one!”
            He whirled back towards her, nostrils flaring.  “It was out of date.”
            “No, it wasn’t!  It had everything that this one has… oh, wait… I’m wrong there.  Our old one ran!  You’ve always done this!  Gotta have the latest technology.  What is it with you?”
            Ignoring her—as he always did when he knew his wife was on the verge of winning an argument—he bent forward and picked up the holo-reader.  Tiffany resisted a strong urge to scream as she crossed her arms and turned, very deliberately, away from him.  A few moments of silence passed as he simply sat there, scrolling through the manual yet again. 
            “Aha!” he cried finally, causing her to jump again.
            “What?” she asked.
            Without bothering to answer, he reached down to a small lever that was located between the two seats.  He jerked it to the left and then pushed it up.  Smiling triumphantly, he motioned towards the ignition button.  Tiffany pressed it, and the hovercraft roared to life.
            “We had it in the wrong gear.  That’s all,” he said, as if he had known all along. 
            With her hands tightening around the steering wheel so much that her knuckles turned white, she made a sharp turn in the direction they had come from. 
            “W-what are doing, Tiff?”
            “I’m taking this stupid, overly sophisticated piece of crap back to the dealer and getting our old craft back!  Wrong gear… of all the stupid things!”
            “But, Tiff…”
            Tiffany shot him a look so full of fire that he only smiled weakly.
            “Um… if you hurry, honey, you can beat their closing time.”    

I wrote this one back in 2015, inspired by a story my aunt had told my mom once about how her brand-new model car kept breaking down.  She kept having to take it back to the dealer so they could "work out the bugs."  (It was leased.)  If you liked this, let me know.  
 

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